Score: 10

"Amazing"

submission: B

date: June 12, 2007

... this is what newgrounds is meant for. Movies about the letter B hence the name "Newgrounds"

Score: 10

"YAY"

submission: NG vs UGO

date: June 12, 2007

go NEWGROUNDS

You should try submitting this to UGO

Score: 8

"It was good"

submission: Guns For Lollipops

date: June 11, 2007

I'll point out the things that could have been better, the rest was great.

-quality could have been a little higher
-the voice acting sounded like you were whispering to not wake up your parents or something
-The TV background frame thing was annoying
-This didn't seem like it took 3 months. Maybe you didn't work on it that much at a time? It seemed like something that would have taken me 1 or 2 weeks... Great animation though. If it takes 3 months to make something like this, than spend 3 months!

Score: 9

"That's one of my top 10 favorite songs"

submission: Stop Motion Hysteria

date: June 11, 2007

Great animation and song! It should have had a story going along with the song though. Quality could have been better too.

Score: 3

"Well..."

submission: Prelude, The chase

date: June 10, 2007

for your first real flash, it was pretty good. It just shoudn't be on Newgrounds because it doesn't have a story and it's not that long.

Graphics-The graphics were great though and the animation was good. Great gun drawings

Style-I like movies with not dialogue, just a song in the background. It gives the viewer more imagionation to what's going on in it.

Sound-Great music. Fit the mood well

Violence-There was violence

Interactivity-Replay button counts

Humor-There was none

Overall-This shouldn't be on Newgrounds because of it's lacking of a storyline and basic plot. If you use those graphics, and style again, but with a longer movie it's shure to get accepted.

Score: 9

"It was good"

submission: Joyful Adventures

date: June 8, 2007

I like pudding

Score: 8

"It was funny"

submission: Windows SS

date: June 3, 2007

It just needs more things you can click on

Score: 10

"Excellent Frame-by-Frame"

submission: -NoX-

date: June 3, 2007

You're a really good artist. This should be turned into a series, but I don't see where the story could go or if it could be explained a bit more.

Also, the sound fit into the movie perfectly

10/10 for a Flash

Score: 4

"Should be fixed up a bit."

submission: Eclipse: Genesis

date: June 2, 2007

Technically, it wasn't a game. The buttons you pressed just moved you along through a movie's dialogue and the fight was just clicking buttons and you don't really have much of a control over how the fight goes...

You should watch some actionscript tutorials and get better at it and finish the game series, because this was made with only basic frame-changing actionscript and not really anything more complex.

The graphics need a little bit of work too, unless that's the style you wanted. If you continued the series as a movie than it could do good. The story's ok so far... you don't really know everything that's going on. But if you finished it as a series of movies with better graphics (or games with better actionscript and graphics) It would be a lot better. Still 4/10. I voted a 3

Score: 8

"Awsome..."

submission: Atom Juggler

date: May 28, 2007

good physics, good actionscripting, good game, and good music